The image to the right shows the written feedback from my teacher. My teacher highlighted the song choice was strong and that there would be good opportunities to add a narrative side to the video which is something that we did not consider. In terms of the location we needed to consider where would be appropriate and get images of this as the lighting would be an issue. The choice of a derelict setting was good however we would need to consider lighting for this as natural lighting would not be enough to have a professional looking video.

We need to create test footage as a group in order to make sure that the band members we chose would look appropriate for the video. Equipment would also be something that we need to consider as we need to make sure that the drummer has their own set of drums in order for the video to look professional and believable rather than unorganised.